Aakhiri Khwaaish – Sujit Yadav

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Tu jitna saamne aayegi mere,
Main utna muskuraunga,
Tu jitna jayegi door mujhse,
Main bhaaga chala aaunga…

Tu jitna sitam karegi mujhpe,
Main utna tujhe chahunga,
Tu bhulana chahegi mujhko,
Main har baat pe yaad aaunga…

Tu kosish karegi rulane ki mujhko,
Main hansta nazar aaunga,
Tu laakh bewafaa keh le mujhko,
Main har gam ko seh jaunga…

Ek din hogi shaadi teri,
Mai tujhe laal jode me dekhne aaunga,
Tu dekh ke muh fer legi mujhko,
Mai chaah kar bhi ro na paunga…

Ho rahe honge fere tere,
Main peene mehkhaane jaunga,
peeunga us din jee bhar ke,
aur na jane kitne aansu bahaunga..

Ek chhoti si khwaaish hai meri,

Tujhe kisi aur ka hota dekh,
Mujhe pataa hai main mar jaunga,
Bas tu aana aakhiri baar dekhne mujhe,
Main sukun se fir Jal jaunga…

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About Sujit Yadav

Sujit Yadav is a tech savvy who loves to explore about new technology. he is also passionate about Animation and Game development. He loves to write poems and loves to draw. he is a learner of life who loves travelling, meeting new people and Ddancing.

Posted on May 5, 2013, in My Diary and tagged , , , , , , , , , , , , . Bookmark the permalink. 3 Comments.

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